Theme : family, parenting, divorce, children, gaming, corporate business, women loving women relationships, exes, bisexuality, finding love and happiness
Tropes : nanny/boss, rich girl/poor girl, age-gap
The blurb from the publisher…
The nanny is hot for her boss, but she’s been burned falling for a straight woman in the past.
Julianna Bristol is on the brink of success as her fledgling video game design company goes after the opportunity of a lifetime. But her ex-husband is intent on making her fodder for late-night comedy. When she unexpectedly gains custody of her nine-year-old niece, everything in Julianna’s exquisitely planned life changes in the blink of an eye.
Sadie Culpepper is out of work and drowning in debt. She’s as unable to commit professionally as she is romantically. A last-minute nanny gig offers a lifeline, but making it through the summer working for the woman the late-night hosts call Permafrost might take everything she’s got.
Their mutually beneficial business arrangement is threatened as the magnetic pull between them grows stronger with each passing day. Both women are forced to confront their deepest fears and insecurities. Julianna is drawn to the younger Sadie in ways she never imagined possible. And Sadie, scarred by past heartbreak, struggles to trust again, especially with her heart and financial security on the line.
Will they have the courage to defy convention and seize their chance at happiness? Or will they succumb to the pressures of society, letting go of the one thing that could save them both?
If you enjoy seductive, taboo, age-gap romance with a lot of heart, don’t miss the latest collaboration of Miranda MacLeod and TB Markinson.
My thoughts…
T.B. Markinson and Miranda MacLeod have always been known to deliver engaging, well-written narratives, but this one might be their most commendable yet. Pieces of Us is a tenderly told story that revolves around Julianna Bristol, a video game designer on the verge of success, and Sadie Culpepper, a nanny struggling with debt and commitment issues. Their lives intertwine in complex ways when Julianna unexpectedly gains custody of her niece, causing them both to pause and question everything they’ve believed about themselves and love.
The novel immediately captivates readers and pulls them in with its well-developed storyline and likable characters. Julianna is a talented businesswoman standing on the brink of a major career breakthrough with her video game design. When tragedy suddenly strikes her family, she is given custody of her niece, causing her to navigate uncharted territory and reassess her busy professional life. This balance of corporate ambition and family need proves to be challenging, so she enlists in the aid of a nanny. Bringing Sadie onboard to help her care for her niece sets the stage for a complex and evolving relationship between the women, one filled with self-discovery and love, key ingredients for an engaging read.
The novel’s strengths lie in its exploration of its themes—love, trust, and courage, especially in regards to societal norms. Markinson and MacLeod skillfully depict Julianna and Sadie’s emotional journey as they confront their deepest fears and insecurities. As the story progresses, the women’s relationship evolves and takes shape as they navigate the challenges of their intertwined lives. This naturally provides an interesting dynamic to the story’s overall composition. Furthermore, it fuels a chemistry between the women that’s completely palpable, creating a compelling interplay that keeps readers thoroughly invested. Most impressively though, it underscores Markinson and MacLeod’s talent as writers, for they effectively use the interactions of these two characters to reveal the complexities of human emotion and the transformative power of love, making the story meaningful and convincing for the reader.
Pieces of Us’s major appeal lies in the fact that it is written with real sensitivity, making it incredibly heartwarming. Markinson and MacLeod have consistently earned much acclaim for their writing, but Pieces of Us, in my opinion, is breathtakingly beautiful and a real standout. The way they handle taboo subjects is beyond praiseworthy. Their approach to sensitive, emotional material is scripted with depth and maturity, capturing a truth that makes scenes resonate. Because the duo tackles tender subjects with a delicate touch, they ensure that the narrative remains respectful and thought-provoking. They pursue a delicate dance of family drama and personal ambition, yet are mindful of the love story between Julianna and Sadie, letting it unfold naturally. This allows readers to be immersed into Julianna and Sadie’s journey. Ultimately though, it showcases Markinson and MacLeod’s talent as storytellers.
Not only does Pieces of Us deserve attention for its emotional depth and adept handling of complex themes, it contains strong character arcs. Julianna and Sadie’s journey is well-scripted and relatable, marked by personal growth and self-discovery. The characters’ struggles and triumphs strike a chord with readers, making their story relatable and inspiring. Additionally, their arcs are built upon layers of emotion, creating a depth that allows readers to connect on a profoundly personal level. And because it is attentive to Julianna and Sadie’s relationship challenges, readers are able to easily embrace them, ensuring engagement and satisfaction until the end.
Final remarks…
Pieces of Us by T.B. Markinson and Miranda MacLeod is a captivating novel that explores themes of love, trust, and societal norms. The engaging narrative, well-developed characters, and heartwarming romance make it a standout read. The authors’ ability to handle complex themes with sensitivity and depth adds to its strength and appeal. Readers will root for Julianna and Sadie’s happiness as they are immersed in their journey. Ultimately, Pieces of Us is a testament to the power of love and should not be missed.
Strengths…
Engaging narrative
Strong character arcs built upon reliable, reliable emotional depth
Heartwarming romance filled with touching tenderness
TB Markinson is a best selling author who lives in New England. When she isn’t writing, she’s traveling the world, watching sports on the telly, visiting pubs, or reading. Not necessarily in that order.
Besides being a writer, she is an advocate and proud promoter of sapphic fiction. She cohosts the Lesbians Who Write Podcast with Clare Lydon and runs the I Heart SapphFic website with Miranda MacLeod.
A bit about Miranda MacLeod…
Originally from southern California, Miranda now lives in New England and writes heartfelt romances and romantic comedies featuring witty and charmingly flawed women that you’ll want to marry. Or just grab a coffee with, if that’s more your thing. Before becoming a writer, she spent way too many years in graduate school, worked in professional theater and film, and held temp jobs in just about every office building in downtown Boston.
Authors: Nan Campbell, Alaina Erdell, Jesse J. Thoma
Publisher: Bold Strokes Books
Publication date: June 1, 2024
Editor: Cindy Cresap
ISBN 13: 978-1-63679-652-9
Available formats: ebook, paperback
Print Length: 312 pages
Genre: romance
Themes: women loving women, family, culture, marriage, careers, relationships, independence, striking out on one’s own, love, romance, white collar crime, whistle blowers, getting framed for murder, running from bad guys
The blurb…
When business turns to pleasure, romance ignites.
In “New York is Losing Hope” by Nan Campbell: With thirty-five on the horizon and still single, Hope Mason is abandoning her beloved New York City to try her luck in bright, shiny Los Angeles. One problem. This New Yorker is terrified of driving, an essential skill for Californians. She hires instructor Val Caceres to teach her how to drive off into the sunset, but Val could be the one thing she doesn’t want to leave behind.
In “Two Women, Two Weddings” by Alaina Erdell: Aarti Singh’s brilliance in cardiology hasn’t diminished her longing to be an event planner, even if familial expectations demand a career in medicine. Meanwhile, Jo Samuels’s love life has taken a back seat to her demanding chef career and her desire to keep her life simple. When Aarti hires Jo to cater a wedding, their attraction is undeniable, but how can they fall in love when they’re struggling to be true to themselves?
In “For Love or Money” by Jesse J. Thoma: Short-seller Frances “Frankie” Sender has always been good at picking winners, but her skills might make her the ultimate loser when a company she is researching frames her for a crime. Her only chance at staying alive is Dakota “Oz” Osborne, a woman with a million-dollar reason to toss her in jail. They’ll have to trust each other and avoid the easy cash out if they want the stock to rise on a chance at love.
My thoughts…
Anthologies are wonderful because they give readers a nice sampling of a publisher’s authors. It’s especially appealing when they pick a solid lineup of writers, like Bold Strokes Books did with their most recent release, Hot Hires. It features Nan Campbell, Alaina Erdell, and Jesse J. Thoma, and each writer puts their best foot forward, showcasing their distinct talents as storytellers.
Nan Campbell gets top billing in this publication, and with four books to her name, Campbell is quickly becoming a hot commodity at Bold Strokes Books. Her debut, The Rules of Forever, was not only a hit with readers but also earned her a Lambda Literary Award. Her second and third books, The No Kiss Contract and Like They Do in the Movies, garnered her even more praise. Both are currently up for an Ann Bannon Golden Crown Literary Award. Though her career as an author is still in its infancy, it’s quite clear that Bold Strokes has struck gold with her.
Once readers get into Campbell’s contribution, they’ll quickly see that she was a good choice for this anthology. Her writing is a real treat; there’s just so much to enjoy. Readers easily fall in love with Hope and Val. They are appropriately fleshed out and likable characters—quite adorable actually. Furthermore, Campbell does a nice job building the romance between them. I must say, I was impressed; for a short story, Campbell accomplishes a lot. Her use of secondary characters and setting (which almost acts like a supporting character) make the writing shine. Each is well developed and well structured, adding nice dollops of contrast and texture to the storytelling. Bottom line—the whole piece is just nicely done. In fact, I wouldn’t mind an expanded version of “New York is Losing Hope” 😉
The second short story is written by Alaina Erdell, and she never misses with her work. Like Campbell, her debut also earned her some healthy attention. Fire, Water, and Rock tallied six awards, which is certainly something to crow about. Her second book underscores that her talent is real, and that she’s not just a one-hit wonder. Off the Menu collected seven awards and is my personal favorite.
One of the things that readers appreciate about Erdell is the way she weaves her unique passions into her storytelling. She has a real knack for captivating readers with the details, whether it be art, geology, or cooking, but especially cooking. Her Hot Hires contribution involves a lovely romance between an uptight, high-strung wedding planner (who happens to be the bride’s sister) and a chef for the wedding festivities. Even though “Two Women, Two Weddings” is short, Erdell demonstrates that she knows how to create believable tension while keeping the romance fun. Her vivid descriptions and fluid prose add so much life to the storytelling; it truly makes for an enticing read. Like Campbell, Erdell may have just recently cut her teeth in this business, but she’s proven she’s quite comfortable on the page. Whether it’s a full-length novel or a short story, she always provides a pleasurable read.
The last selection in this anthology, “For Love or Money,” is written by Jesse J. Thoma. Unlike her fellow co-authors, she’s not new to the storytelling game. She wrote her first book, The Chase, in 2013 and garnered positive feedback for it. Since then, she’s produced eight more novels, spanning genres like butch-femme romance and crime fiction. Many of them have caught the attention of award panels, garnering nominations from both the Golden Crowne Literary Society and the Lambda Literary committee. Readers are drawn to her high-octane, fast-paced dramas, and that’s what she delivers in Hot Hires. Her story “For Love or Money” packs a punch and leaves readers wanting more. For just a short tale, she’s able to develop a complex plot without any confusing leaps or jumps, tying everything up neat and sweet in the end. She sets it up perfectly too with a real flash-bang start; readers are pulled into the high-speed drama immediately and they don’t want to let go. Furthermore, the leading ladies are much too alluring to be denied. They have chemistry for days, and their sizzle jumps off the page. This was my first story by Thoma, but it won’t be my last!
Final remarks…
Hot Hires is a fun anthology. I enjoyed all three stories. The writing is strong and cohesive with tight themes throughout. The character development is solid and the plots are completely engaging. This is a perfect beach read—light, entertaining and easy to enjoy. I highly recommend it.
Nan Campbell’s debut novel, The Rules of Forever, is a Lambda Literary Award winner. She grew up on the Jersey Shore, where she first discovered her love of romance novels as a kid, spending her summers at the beach reading stories that were wholly inappropriate for her age. She was, and continues to be, a sucker for a happy ending. Nan lives in New York City.
Alaina Erdell lives in Ohio with her partner and their crazy but adorable cats. Prior to writing contemporary sapphic romances, she worked as a chef. She enjoys painting, cooking for friends and family, experimenting with molecular gastronomy, reading, traveling, and spoiling her beloved nephews.
Jesse J. Thoma: Although she works best under the pressure of a deadline, Jesse Thoma balks at being told what to do. Despite that, she’s no fool and knows she’d be lost without her editor’s brilliance. Seneca Falls was a finalist for a Lambda Literary Award in romance. Data Capture, Serenity, and Courage were finalists for the Golden Crowne Literary Society “Goldie” Award.
Want to know more about these authors? Check out their websites or Goodreads page:
Architect Gene López-Pérez has everything she’s ever wanted: her daughter Susana, a flourishing career, and Isa—the love of her life and Susana’s biological mother. But when Gene is denied entry to a hospital emergency room because Susana is not biologically hers, the harsh reality of her situation begins to sink in.
Meanwhile, Isa, a trailblazing biomedical engineer, juggles her hidden family life and a career threatened by homophobia in a male-dominated field. She doesn’t dare risk losing the funding for the important medical research that she’s doing.
When Spain legalizes same-sex marriage, Gene proposes a bold solution—move to Spain, marry, and secure the parental rights she’s never known. But Isa’s refusal sparks a rift, pushing Gene to a daring decision for her family’s future.
As Gene contemplates a groundbreaking legal battle for parental rights in Florida, and Isa’s career teeters on the edge, their love faces the ultimate test. Can they bridge the divide between them, or will their dreams and duties force them apart?
My thoughts…
This book blew me away. Cris Ascunce’s narrative dives deep into the relationships people build and the connections they share with one another. Through her poignantly scripted prose, she relates the importance of family and how it not only shapes one’s life, but their romantic relationships as well. Both Isa and Gene’s family members have a strong presence in their lives. This is especially true of Martha, Isa’s mother. Martha provides a strong support system for the women as they find their way back to one another, and it’s touchingly beautiful to see. The compassion she shows towards Gene is especially heartwarming; their interactions are inspiring as well as comforting. Their bond is undeniably close and adds an emotional depth that’s real and meaningful.
It’s apparent that Ascunce has done her homework before sitting down to write this one. It comes through clearly in the text. She intricately threads culture, tradition and history into the storytelling, making it absorbing as well as compelling. Furthermore, she neatly ties it into the setting to push the narrative, honoring the LGBTQ history in honest and emotional ways. Ascunce’s approach quietly draws readers in, inspiring them to care about the characters and their families. She’s a smart storyteller, too; she provides readers with a story within a story, as this isn’t just about Gene and Isa’s journey. It is a reflection of something bigger. Through it, one might say she tells a grand love story, a tribute to all the real-life Genes and Isas that have traveled the same path and triumphed.
Final remarks…
This is a fantastic debut. It’s intelligent and insightful. Ascunce lets readers get to know these characters on a deep and visceral level. Readers understand them and care about them. And because they do, they appreciate their joy as well as their pain as they grow and change. Gene and Isa’s backstory—as well as relevant lgbtq historical markers—is neatly woven into the narrative, making their journey compelling as well as page turning. Ascunce tells this tale with gracious compassion and respect, squeezing readers’ hearts at times. In many ways, this story represents many queer couple’s. Narratives like these are so important and need to be more present in the world. I can’t recommend My Best Plan enough. I am excited to see what Ascunce writes next.
Strengths…
Intelligently written
Compelling narrative
Well-developed characters
Soundly constructed plot
Enticing writing style
A peek inside…
Gene
“Pampa pampa pampa!” Tito Horacio yells incoherently in my ear. He tries to sing—poorly, but God love him, enthusiastically—over the phone. In the background, Kool & The Gang belts out a cacophonous rumble of the cheesy song from the last millennium as people sing along and glasses clink. My uncle’s explosive laughter rolls through the phone, and I hold my BlackBerry away from my ear a few seconds until it dies down. Delightful as it is to hear, I wonder if he’s drunk-dialing from a party.
“¿Qué está pasando, Tito?” I yell through the phone, hoping he can hear me. Glancing at the digital clock on my computer screen, it’s after midnight in Barcelona and he’s carrying on like a college student during spring break.
“Gene. You haven’t heard? Parliament passed same-sex marriage this morning.” His voice cracks. “Can you believe it?”
“Today?” I say. “No way, not today. I knew it was coming, but I had no idea it’d be today.”
While Tito’s party guests seem to distract him, I open a tab in Safari and type Spain, same-sex marriage in the Google search box. A moment and about a thousand results later, I click on the first link. It’s a New York Times article by Renwick McLean, and right there, the bold headline with an image of the rainbow flag reads, “Spain Legalizes Gay Marriage; Law Is Among the Most Liberal.”
I flip my desk calendar to today’s date. Thursday, June 30, 2005. Well, damn. Who’da thought Spain would beat the US at legalizing same-sex marriage? Spain—the country of my parents’ birth—a Catholic country, no less.
But it’s not until I skim through the article that a few words in the second paragraph catch my eye and momentarily stop my heart from beating. “The bill, passed 187 to 147, says couples will have the same rights, including the freedom to marry and to adopt children, regardless of gender.”
I hang up with Tito and begin daydreaming, of course, because that’s what I do. If Isa and I got married in Spain, I could petition the courts there to legally adopt Susana as her second parent, and we can finally be a family. Legally! Being a Spanish citizen has its privileges: I can sponsor my wife and daughter, so they can become Spanish citizens, too. If we do all that now, by the time it’s legal in the United States, our marriage and my parental rights would be legal everywhere else, including Florida. But how much longer until that happens? It’d be easier if we did it in Spain, now. Then, I wouldn’t constantly feel marginalized when it comes to raising my five-year-old daughter. Big dreams, Gene.
The more I think of marriage as the traditional next step for couples wanting to enrich their lives and start a family, the more I think of my own precarious situation in Susana’s life, who’s my daughter in name only because we have no biological connection. Love is the only thing binding us.
In less than a month, Susana will be five years old. She’ll start kindergarten in the fall, but I shuttle her back and forth to a pre-K program now. With a notarized signature, Isa authorized me to drop Susana off and pick her up from that school. Martha, Isa’s mom, has the same privilege, sans the notarized authorization. And since I’m mostly the one who takes her to see her pediatrician, Isa signed consent forms there, too. It’s ridiculous. A puñetero authorization form is needed everywhere I go where Susana is concerned.
With all the focus on marriage, the end to my workday has arrived. I shut down my AutoCAD, sign out of my company’s network, lock the door to my suite, and walk the twenty paces it takes to get to my house for dinner.
[When I] slide open the glass door and walk into the kitchen, Isa is bent over the open oven, two juicy chicken breasts (one of them pierced with a thermometer) are laid out in a deep-dish oven pan, sitting on the center rack, and she’s poking at the birds, testing their doneness, I suppose. Meanwhile, Susana sits happily in her booster seat, hands, mouth, and dimpled chin covered in chicken juice, kicking her legs to and fro as she chomps down on a drumstick.
“Hey, G,” Isa says, peeking up at me, and I’m suddenly pulled out of this Norman Rockwell-ian portrait that’s labeled M A R R I A G E. The only thing Isa is missing is a white apron with a ruffled edge.“I made rice, and the chicken just needs to rest for a couple more minutes. You hungry? I was just about to call you.” Isa meticulously places the two breasts on a slab of butcher block, kicks the oven door closed, then saunters to the sink to fill the pan with soapy water. Routine. It’s the only thing in our lives that doesn’t change. She lives for it…
Without a word, Susana hops off her booster, walks over to me, gives me the greasiest hug, and smudges a kiss on both my cheeks. [She heads to her room and I make] a mental note to wipe down the banister, railing, and walls when I go back upstairs.
“Did you hear that Spain passed same-sex marriage today?” I ask, standing a few feet behind Isa… “You know,” I say as I walk over to the sink and wash my hands. “Since I’m a Spanish citizen, we could, for the sake of argument, get married in Jerez, or if that’s too provincial, we can do it in Sevilla.” I pause… “We can live on the vineyard in Jerez with Don Rigoberto while we establish my parental rights over Susana.” I rush my words, so I can get them all out…What I’m thinking of doing might seem far-fetched to her, but it’s an excellent plan, if only she’d listen. “By the time same-sex marriage is legal in the States, we could either move back here or stay there, in case Florida is the last state in the union to recognize same-sex marriages and adoptions by gay people.” This might be the Sunshine State, but it’s been putting a damper on my life since I was born.
Isa fixes her eyes on me but remains silent as my hopes seem to evaporate.
“[We could] live in Spain. [We could] get married there, the law will protect us. We’d have all the rights afforded to all other married couples in Spain, including adoption. And I would be somebody in your life and in our daughter’s life over there. I’d be her recognized parent if something were to happen to you. And if something happens to me, you’d both inherit my stake in the vineyard.”
“G, my work is here. You know I’m in the middle of important research at the hospital, growing human tissue to replace mechanical heart valves. We’re building real heart valves with human tissue…in a lab! It takes time.” She folds up the towel and places it on the counter, seemingly putting an end to my daydreaming. “I won’t leave my research now. Besides I can’t. I still have another two years to fulfill my obligation. Remember, they paid my student debt. And anyway, you’re a successful architect. Your career is booming. Why would we move from here?” she asks, dramatically raising her hands in the air as she turns in a circle. “And, if something does happen to me here, I signed palimony papers making you Susana’s guardian, or have you forgotten? So, for all practical purposes, you’ll be her parent.”
“Yes but ‘for all practical purposes’ isn’t enough for me anymore. You’re forgetting that a judge for Children and Family Services has to rule in my favor for me to be her guardian. And that’s if something happens to you, but what about now? I want it to be known that I’m her mother, too.” My voice cracks. I clasp my hands together behind my back to hide their trembling.
“And,” I say calmer, centered. “If something does happen to you and I wanted to adopt her, I would have to lie about my sexual orientation.”
“Well, what’s wrong with that?” she asks. “Wouldn’t you do that for your daughter’s sake?”
“Isa,” I reply, tamping down the sudden tension headache. The pressure between my eyebrows is digging into my brain. My hands aloft, I grasp my index finger. “First of all, it’s illegal to lie on official documents, and you’d better believe that officials for the state of Florida will investigate, but regardless, I don’t think I should have to lie to adopt the daughter I helped bring into this world. That’s if something happens to you.”
I grasp my middle finger. “Second, you are required to be present to give consent for medical care. Remember what happened the first time we rushed Susana to the emergency room?”
I take a breath, trying to wipe the memory away and grasp my ring finger. “Third, I can’t sign any kind of legal document for her because I’m not her legal parent.”
Pulling at my pinky, sending pins and needles up my arm, I continue, “And fourth, I pay a tax on the benefit I receive from the firm to have both of you on my health insurance. You know, it’s a real shame my company is more liberal than this country.”
With my chest heaving, head throbbing, and stomach spinning, I give her my final point. “Isa, marriage is about more than just the bond between you and me. There are laws in place that protect the family unit. Why is that so hard for you to understand?”
“Gene, we can’t move to another country to get married,” she says with cutting finality.
“Isa, we’ve been together for fifteen years! Living together since college, officially, like most straight married couples. We’ve created a family. You won’t move to Spain so that I may feel secure in my role as one of Susana’s mothers?” I keep my voice low, so Susana doesn’t hear us argue. A bit clearer than a whisper, but my throat might as well be bleeding from forcing my words through my esophagus without involving any vocal cords.
“Gene…Where is the urgency? Why can’t you wait until Florida follows suit and legalizes adoptions for gays and lesbians?” she asks.
“Because I know what it’s like to lose both my parents and to be unprepared to live without them!” I bellow with a sob. This time, a little louder than before, and the words seem to gush out of me just as the tears sting at my eyes. “But the difference is the state knew who both my parents were. If I die right now, there’s no record of whom I loved or by whom I’m survived. Don’t you see? I have a birth certificate that says who my parents were. It doesn’t say ‘unknown’ under the word father.”
“So, you want your name on Susana’s birth certificate under the word father?” she asks, brows furrowed. “I don’t understand how that’s going to change anything.”
“Because you have no idea what it means to have a child you love, who loves you just as hard, and have zero legal connection to her. You gave birth to Susana, that is undeniable. Your name is on her birth certificate. Mother: Isabel Susana Acosta,” I say, making gestures in the air as if Isa’s name and title were top billing on a theater marquee.
“I can’t do this anymore,” I hear myself say, the words leaving my mouth in slow motion and in a deep wistful tone. I drop my arms to my sides and lower my gaze to my Reeboks. The back of my neck is stiff as tears swell in my eyes. “I’ve given this everything I have, and if you can’t at least understand where I’m coming from, then you and I have no business being together at all…”
“Ay,Wait, what?” She rounds the peninsula and steps right behind me. She puts her hand on my shoulder, and I turn to face her, shrugging it off in the process. “You’re leaving? Leaving us?”
“No, Isa.” I point a trembling finger at her. My voice is quivering. “I’m leaving you.” Never in a million years did I think I would ever utter those words to Isa. “I will still be in Susana’s life, provide for her, and co-parent her with you, the way it states in our palimony papers. I just…I can’t live here with you anymore.” Shaking my head, I turn back around and make my way to the stairs.
“Gene!”
I turn to face her.
“Be reasonable,” she says. Stomach acid churns, melting my insides. “You won’t stay here with me if I don’t move to another country where we can get married?”
I shove my fists in the pockets of my Bermuda shorts. My head thrashing as if I’ve just come back from a Mötley Crüe concert. This isn’t an impossible task. My own parents moved to the States when the future of their family became untenable in Franco’s fascist Spain in 1969. Both sets of Isa’s grandparents did the same when they fled Castro’s communist Cuba in the early sixties. “Isa,” I say to her, after a few deep breaths. “We both knew this day was coming, let’s be honest with ourselves. I’ve loved you since I was thirteen years old, but while you’ve been playing make-believe, I’ve been building a family, a home, and a life with you.” I pound my chest again, and it’s as if my heart has stopped beating. “We’ve been lovers from the get-go, sharing a house, the chores, the expenses, and a bed. For all practical purposes, as you say, you’re my wife.”
“But, G, we’ve been best friends,” she insists, and she’s being serious, which is what’s most astonishing.
“¿Qué?” As my blood blisters, my eyes strain under the sudden pressure, I’m befuddled by her words. “No. Don’t you dare say that!” Spittle springs off my bottom lip. “Don’t you dare call me your best friend. We are a couple! Best friends don’t plan the life we’ve planned for fifteen years, they don’t sleep together, and they certainly don’t have children together. Friends don’t miss each other so much they practically starve themselves, waiting to be reunited with the other in college! You and I have never been friends, and because you only think of me as such reassures me that I am nothing to you.” I stop to give my rapid pulse a chance to ease.
“I wanted more from this relationship,” I continue. “From the life we diligently pieced together. The life you planned for us doesn’t fit me anymore! But you still don’t realize that aside from all the papers we signed, Susana is legally only your daughter. Do you get that? I can write it a hundred times in the air, and it’ll still be air and not a legal document.” I stop speaking abruptly, turn, and climb the stairs. I need to leave for my own sanity and figure out how I’m going to adopt my daughter.
“Wait. Fuck, Gene, you know I would never take her away from you, if that’s what you’re worried about!” She’s right behind me.
I wait until we’re inside our bedroom to turn around. “Really? You won’t even marry me; how can I expect you to think of me as her other parent?” As I blurt out those last words, I know I’ve gone too far and immediately regret them. But I carry on because an apology won’t help matters. “Is it really because you don’t want to move to Spain that you won’t marry me, or is it because I’m a woman?”
“I don’t see you like that,” she says. “You’re just Gene to me.”
“Well,” I say. “Gene has a pair of tits and a vagina.” I grab my breasts and then cup my crotch.
“Gene!” Isa says in a hard whisper. “Don’t say that.”
“Don’t you get it? Susana came out of your body, she shares your DNA. She looks exactly like you.” I point out our door toward her bedroom. “I need it to say somewhere that she’s my daughter, too.”
I turn and walk away, quietly making my way across the hall, leaving Isa to wonder what just happened…Ambling into the dressing room, I grab my suitcase from my side of the closet and open it over the ottoman that sits in the center of the room. I can’t stay here one more minute.
“You’re leaving now?” Isa asks, closing the door gently behind her.
“I can’t stay here with you.”
Isa
Fuck me! She’s gone.
When she left, Gene closed the side door so gently, it barely made a sound on her way out. I felt my insides spill all over [the floor].
Mother of fucking pearl!
When that breaking news alert about Spain passing marriage equality came through, I should have known Gene was going to start this up again. But she doesn’t get it. She never has. At the research hospital, I’m at the end of an infinite tug-of-war, and the rope is slipping away on my side.
Frustrated and needing some motherly advice, I pick up the kitchen phone, swiftly dialing Mami’s number.
“Hola mi niña ¿cómo estas?” Mami says after picking up on the first ring. Her voice is warm and familiar, and it’s hard to remember how contentious our relationship was once. She’s probably sitting in her plush butaca with her TV table covering her thighs, eating one of her healthier concoctions she bulk-cooked earlier in the week. She did her best cooking wholesome food after the cardiologist diagnosed my dad with a calcified heart valve. But after receiving a bio-prosthetic valve implant, he died four years later. And now that he’s gone, she probably has more vegetables on her plate than anything else. I clear my throat before answering to keep my voice from collapsing.
“Ay, Mami,” I reply with a quivering lip. “I think Gene just left me.”
“¿Qué?” she asks, incredulous. “Pero, Isabel Susana Acosta, what have you done?”
I somehow calm my frenzied weeping and answer, “She…Spain…same-sex marriage…” Okay, maybe that wasn’t calm at all.
“Take a deep breath and start from the beginning.”
A Miami native, Cris Ascunce was born to Cuban immigrants. Author of the novel My Best Plan, Cris is a voracious LGBTQ rights advocate and hopes to enlighten her readers on the struggles, advancements, and setbacks the community has endured and still faces, as well as what the long road ahead has in store to reach full equity with her writing. A graphic designer by trade, she once designed collateral with catchy headlines to lure visitors to Miami; now, she writes about it in her prose. A lover of travel, reading, and animals, Cris divides her time between Miami and Spain with her wife and their canine and feline daughters.
Web designer Kelsey Kenny always dreamed of spending Christmas at the beach, but when her daughters make other plans, she is left on her own. A chance call from her client in the Virgin Islands has her packing her bags for an exciting stay at their resort while she views the property for a website redesign.
After her divorce, the idea of spending her first Christmas without her two young sons had Isabella Burns anything but merry. To keep from ruining Christmas for the rest of her family, Isabella decided to put her energy into her work. Her newest client was a brand renovation for a resort in the Virgin Islands. There would be plenty of sunshine, tropical drinks and not a hint of snow.
On their first night, Kelsey and Isabella realize they are the only singles at the resort and quickly become friends. While brainstorming ideas with the CEO they come up with a unique marketing plan that has them returning every month to highlight a specific vacation.
As their friendship deepens, sparks begin to fly. Is this the island magic the locals talk about? Why does it feel like they’re leaving their hearts in paradise? Could they bring paradise home?
Come along on this romantic adventure complete with an age gap, a toaster oven and a friends to lovers happily ever after that will warm your heart.
My thoughts…
Jamey Moody’s novels have gained a following among sapphic readers, and much of that is due to the fact that she produces stories that have low angst. The absence of heavy, emotional drama allows readers to focus on the romantic intimacy between the characters, making for a tale that is light and fun to read. Readers appreciate that. They also appreciate that she indulges in healthy courtships. Her characters communicate openly and respect boundaries, fostering a positive place for romances to develop. Readers can immerse themselves in stories of hope, joy, and love without the added stress of weighty conflict. See You Next Month, with its themes of friendship, family and love, doles out generous helpings of all of that.
Moody centers this new romance on two very likable, appealing characters, Isabella and Kelsey. They are both well-defined and distinct, exhibiting unique personalities and traits in their own right. However, just because their backstories aren’t loaded with tons of angsty baggage doesn’t mean they are flat. They have layers, contradictions and depth. They change and grow over the course of the story in ways that not only impact the storytelling but the reader as well. Ultimately, readers are able to connect to them, facilitating an empathy that makes the storytelling satisfying.
Besides providing See You Next Month with characters that feel like neighbors, women one would like to hang out with, Moody gives the story a real sense of escapism. Considering the setting primarily focuses on a Virgin Island resort, this romance truly sets the stage for vacation/poolside reading! She gives readers all the sights and sounds of island life. Her gorgeous descriptions and vivid imagery transport readers to the exotic, picturesque landscape of the resort, making it absorbing and relaxing. This light and breezy setting provides a feeling of freedom and adventure, making it tons of fun to read.
Primarily though, this is a feel-good, heartwarming romance. It’s uplifting and easy to digest. Filled with swoon-worthy love (something that Moody is known for) in a world where love conquers all, readers are regaled with a romance that’s comfortably predictable yet soothingly idyllic. Like a pair of comfortable shoes, the storytelling is good for the soul 😉 and feels grand. The simplicity of this reliable, low-stress love story is indulgent and satisfying. It’s a respite from real life, and that’s refreshing.
Final remarks…
See You Next Month is a lovely romance, and yet another example of why Jamey Moody is a quick pick for so many sapphic readers. It is well paced and charming. Isabella and Kelsey have a strong chemistry but it’s not rushed; They do not hastily dash toward the bedroom. They take their time, get to know each other, and this is appealing. Through intimate conversations and tender moments, readers watch them fall in love. This generates something that feels real and genuine, making See You Next Month the perfect comfort read for those that desire romances with strong connections and low angst.
Jamey is a small town Texas girl that grew up believing she could do anything. Her mother loved to read, and romance novels were a favorite that she passed on to her daughter. When she found lesfic novels, her world changed. She not only fell in love with the genre but wanted to write her own stories. When she’s not writing her next lesbian romance, she can be found riding her bike, paddle boarding on a lake or in the middle of some adventure. Learn more about her by checking out her website and social media.
At just 19, Kendall Bettencourt is Hollywood’s hottest young starlet, with the world at her feet – but behind the glamour and designer dresses is a girl who longs for normal.
Payton Taylor is Kendall’s best friend since childhood, and the one person who reminds her of who she really is – her refuge from the craziness of celebrity life.
With her career taking off, Kendall moves Payton to LA to help keep her sane. But Payton is hiding a secret that could make everything ten times worse. Because to her, Kendall is more than a best friend – she is the only girl that she has ever loved.
Just as they need each other more than ever, they’ll have to answer the question of where friendship stops and love begins? And find out whether the feelings they have can survive the mounting pressure of fame…
The Gravity Between Us is a daring, romantic, emotional story about friendship, love, and finding the courage to be yourself in a crazy world.
New Adult novel: recommended for 17+ due to mature themes and sexual content.
My thoughts…
Exploring timeless themes of love, friendship, and self-discovery, The Gravity Between Us by Kristen Zimmer has captivated sapphic readers since it was first published in October of 2013. Payton Taylor and Kendall Bettencourt, the novel’s central figures, embody these themes beautifully. Zimmer combines their friendship, passion and heartache in such a way that it resonates deeply with readers. The personal experiences and emotions of these young women are echoed honestly and reverently, striking something inside readers that rings true even ten years later.
Payton and Kendall are two enchanting and captivating characters, individuals that readers can understand and care about. Crafted with relatability and depth, readers not only see reflections of themselves in these women but they are able to taste their vulnerability and desire as well. The swirl of emotion and confusion draws readers further into the story and sets the stage for an authentic portrayal of sapphic love and friendship, making this story stand the test of time.
Because Zimmer does such a great job developing Payton and Kendall, readers are easily able to fall into their story world. Zimmer’s authentic representation resonates strongly with readers. However, it is her exploration of Hollywood’s fame and fortune that really adds texture. Zimmer uses Hollywood effectively and thoughtfully, giving readers something to chew on. This backdrop provides a layer of interest to the story arc, making Payton and Kendall’s journeys more dynamic. Ultimately, the character development and narrative is enriched by all of this, ensuring that readers are engaged and invested until the end.
It is no wonder readers have loved Zimmer’s debut book for many years; there’s much to appreciate it. However, one of the most noteworthy aspects of The Gravity Between Us is its positive and nuanced portrayal of young love. Written during a time when such stories were still scarce publications, Zimmer’s depiction of Payton and Kendall’s love is pure and lovely. She addresses the complexities and challenges faced by young women questioning their sexuality and desire with a raw truth that still grabs audiences by “the feels” today. These women are on the cusp of self discovery and womanhood, and their journey is filled with an innocence readers can’t deny. Timeless and touching, this memorable love story will leave a lasting mark on all that experience it.
Final remarks…
The Gravity Between Us is a must read classic for the sapphic romance lover. It is a compelling narrative filled with relatable characters and meaningful themes. Once you read it, you won’t forget it, or wonder why it’s become one of the most cherished young adult novels of our time.
A word about the audiobook…
Kelly Burke and Madeline Pell give a fantastic performance in the audio version of The Gravity Between Us. They breathe life into Zimmer’s narrative and add an energy and depth that listeners find easy to appreciate. Their portrayal of each character is distinct and consistent. Listeners are easily drawn into the story world with their steady pacing and professionalism. This was an enjoyable and entertaining audio; I would easily listen to them again.
Kristen is a Massachusetts-based freelance writer and editor. A member of the International Women’s Writing Guild, she holds a B.A. in English with a Concentration in Creative Writing from Montclair State University. She also studied Music Performance with a focus on percussion instruments at Five Towns College. When not busy writing or burying her nose in books of the YA/New Adult fiction persuasion, Kristen enjoys spending time with her family, which includes two adorable Black Lab mixes and a very patient Better Half, and making electronic music. Follow the links below to learn more about her.
Themes: spies, foreign terrorists, government corruption, undercover intelligence agencies, national security, women loving women, sapphic relationships, love,reconciliation, getting back together after a breakup
The blurb from the publisher…
Intelligence analyst Lexie Martin is important. At least that’s what she’s been told by the director of Halcyon Division, the secret organization she works for. Problem is—Lexie doesn’t feel important. She feels…devastated. Struggling to equilibrate after the unexpected implosion of her personal life, and reeling from her failed assignment overseas, Lexie’s barely treading water.
When Halcyon tells Lexie she’s the only person on Earth who can figure out the password to an important file, she realizes the new task is exactly what she needs. And after reconnecting with her girlfriend, Sophia, Lexie thinks she’s finally back on track. But as she tries to unlock Halcyon’s file, Lexie realizes things aren’t what they seem. And when secrets and betrayals are finally exposed, she’s stunned to realize who the enemy really is.
Loyaltyis the exhilarating third installment of E. J. Noyes’s best-selling Halcyon Division Series.
My thoughts…
The allure of a romantic thriller series lies in its ability to seamlessly blend heart-pounding, thrilling suspense with a captivating love story. E. J. Noyes has easily proven she knows how to do this; her Halcyon Division Series has shown itself to be a solid-gold winner. Books one and two were met with high praise, leaving readers wanting more each time. Book three, Loyalty, with its well-mapped, intricate storyline and heart-stopping, high-stakes action, looks destined to be a home-run hit too.
Noyes is a master storyteller. She understands that the core of a successful romantic thriller must encompass a gripping and charged plot, one filled with surprising twists and turns. While every book in the Halcyon Division Series offers readers suspense and thrills, Loyalty is unexpected and top-shelf in every way. It never lets off the accelerator. As readers eagerly turn the pages to uncover clues and insights, they are led to some very surprising and jaw-dropping revelations. With her talent shining brightly on every page, Noyes gives her readers some A+ dramatic and tense moments, all leading to the ultimate climax. This is Tom Clancy-James Bond stuff and should not be missed.
This series is all about complex relationships. Noyes’ exploration of these relationships is layered, dynamic, and sometimes unsettling, but it adds an overall depth that’s beyond compelling. This, combined with the romance between Lexie and Sophia, provides the storytelling with a sense of danger, creating a real emotional rollercoaster for readers. Furthermore, the dynamics between all of Noyes’ characters are multifaceted, making the narrative ripe for character growth. As readers follow their journey—especially Lexie and Sophia’s—they develop a sense of attachment and connection to them. And because Noyes’ character arcs are so well-developed, readers cannot help but become emotionally invested. They root for their success, even amidst the challenge and chaos.
Even though this story is fast-paced, it’s well-balanced. That’s essential for any romantic thriller. Noyes understands this and offers readers a mix of fast-paced action with slower, more intimate moments. It works to achieve two things: 1) It gives readers a moment to digest everything that is happening in the story, and 2) It helps to deepen the romance between Lexie and Sophia. However, these slower scenes never disrupt the story’s underlying tension. Noyes is careful to craft the pacing in such a way that it ensures reader engagement. She strikes the right balance between heart-pumping action and steamy romance, tightly hooking readers into a vibrant story world.
Final remarks…
Loyalty, the latest installment in the Halcyon Division Series, is just another shining example of Noyes’ storytelling prowess. Her exhilarating narrative simply solidifies her place as a master writer and queen of sapphic romantic thrillers. However, to fully appreciate Loyalty, one must read the whole series; there is no way around it. Each book contributes to the overall narrative arc and works to build Loyalty’s climactic moment. With its intricate, surprising plot twists and well-developed, complex characters, this book is guaranteed to blow readers’ minds. They will eagerly devour each page as the rollercoaster ride of danger and romance culminates in a big finish.
E. J. Noyes is an Australian transplanted to New Zealand which may be one of the best things that’s happened to her. She lives with her wife and the best cat in the world.
She started writing because she was bored and had “ideas” and thought writing might free up some brain space. It didn’t. Now she’s addicted and spends much of her free time bashing out words while more new words jostle for attention.
In her scant free time, E. J. scream-swears at computer games, tries to sleep past dawn, coos at her cat and works the fact she’s a best-selling and award-winning author into conversation.
E. J. loves to procrastinate, so feel free to get in contact so she can read that instead of doing work. Here’s her links:
Prima ballet dancer Lillian Jackson is all about control—on stage and in bed. Which is precisely why she keeps her hook-ups to one night, and one night only. No strings. No phone numbers. No scones in the morning. There’s no room for mistakes, especially now that her dance company’s survival depends entirely on winning a million-dollar cash prize in one of America’s biggest reality competitions. That is, until one night with a certain curvy, blue-haired siren changes everything . . .
As burlesque dancer “Blue Lenox,” Izzy Wells is the queen of on-stage seduction. Almost no one knows that she’s close to losing everything—her theater, her home, and her troupe—unless she wins this competition. Now she’s going toe-to-toe with a gorgeous ballerina in front of the world. The chemistry between them is hot, but even more distracting are the feelings they’re starting to develop. There’s no way Lillian can fit Izzy into her life, and Izzy knows better than to fall for someone who can’t put her first. But if they can make it through the show with their hearts and dreams intact, they just might win the biggest prize of all.
My thoughts…
Second Night Stand is a captivating novel written by best-selling author Karelia Stetz-Waters and her spouse, Fay. Though Karelia individually has nine novels to her name, she maintains that many of the best ideas came from Fay. Since Fay has been a big part of Karelia’s brainstorming for years, co-authoring a book seemed inevitable. In fact, it was something they had been talking about for quite some time. However, it was paramount to them that their story included things that are important in strong relationships, like healthy communication, especially during sex. They believe it’s sexy to see this kind of communication in sapphic fiction. I agree; I’m glad they made sure to weave it into Second Night Stand’s narrative. It’s what makes it so much fun to read.
Though this is their first collaboration, it doesn’t feel that way at all. I’m sure much of that stems from their familiarity with one another. Together, they have a fresh and unique writing style, one that’s filled with wit and wisdom. Scenes include a charming sense of humor and keen insight. This enables readers to gain a relevant perspective on the complexities of Blue and Lillian’s relationship. In addition to that, their script flows nicely and allows for emotions to play out organically. This provides the narrative with believability, making the storytelling relatable and reliable.
What stands out most about Karelia and Fay’s style, however, is their vivid and immersive descriptions. Their word smithing makes the story world appear three dimensional. Events and places, especially those that involve the reality show competition, are not only interesting but exciting. As Blue and Lillian navigate the talent show, the Stetz-Waters duo knows just how to use imagery to increase the tension and keep readers invested. Readers can not help but cheer for these two women, making the ride to HEA a roller coaster of fun.
This is a character driven story, and Karelia and Fay do their work here, too. These are strong, independent women, but Karelia and Fay give them relatable flaws and vulnerabilities. These are likable, appealing women that readers enjoy getting to know. However, the writers are cognizant of the fundamentals of character development; they make sure to provide measurable depth and growth while constructing the arcs of these women. Blue and Lillian’s complex portrayal comes off as genuine and authentic, allowing readers to form a connection with them. It doesn’t hurt that their chemistry is off the charts either. Theirs is an unexpected love filled with possibility and passion. Quite simply, their romance resonates, making the journey wholeheartedly worthwhile.
Final remarks…
Second Night Stand gives readers much to appreciate. The storytelling is layered and nuanced, making for a reflective, yet compelling reading journey. The smooth pacing ensures balance between the slower, introspective moments and the faster, exciting scenes. The well-written dialogue is infused with humor. It facilitates a certain degree of levity, making the heavier, emotional moments lighter yet impactive. The characters are well-designed and multi-dimensional; they more than carry their weight. Readers witness their struggles, conflicts, and triumphs, creating a depth and complexity to the storytelling that sticks. This is an excellent first book for the Stetz-Waters team. I look forward to their next collaboration.
Ambassadors of real-life happily-ever-after, Fay and Karelia Stetz-Waters have been together for twenty-three years. They live in Albany, Oregon with their pug-mix Willa Cather and a garden full of dragonflies and hummingbirds. Their writing process involves many afternoons spent at local coffee shops and brewpubs outlining scenes, going over drafts, and high fiving each other. The process works beautifully. Second-Night Stand is their first novel together but definitely not their last.
Themes: love, women loving women, self-discovery, grief, friendship, family, mother/daughter relationships, sapphic romance, bisexuality, neurodiversity, pursuing happiness, coming into one’s own self
Tropes: enemies to lovers, forced proximity
The blurb from the publisher…
Winning the lottery has ruined Opal Devlin’s life. After quitting her dead-end job where she’d earned minimum wage and even less respect, she’s bombarded by people knocking at her door for a handout the second they found out her bank account was overflowing with cash. And Opal can’t seem to stop saying yes.
With her tender heart thoroughly abused, Opal decides to protect herself by any means necessary, which to her translates to putting almost all her new money to buying a failing flower farm in Asheville, North Carolina to let the flowers live out their plant destiny while she uses the cabin on the property to start her painting business.
But her plans for isolation and self-preservation go hopelessly awry when an angry (albeit gorgeous) Pepper Boden is waiting for her at her new farm. Pepper states she’s the rightful owner of Thistle and Bloom Farms, and isn’t moving out. The unlikely pair strike up an agreement of co-habitation, and butt heads at every turn. Can these opposites both live out their dreams and plant roots? Or will their combustible arguing (and growing attraction) burn the whole place down?
My thoughts…
Mazey Eddings’ Late Bloomer is a charming and engaging romance. Its delightful narrative explores growth and maturation with keen insight, offering readers a sweet, sapphic romance that easily resonates. Eddings’ ability to balance humor and raw emotion is noteworthy; she uses it to deliver a fun book with a bit of substance.
The story follows Opal Devlin, whose life takes a strange turn after winning the lottery. Looking for a fresh start and a place to grow her painting business, she purchases a flower farm in Asheville, North Carolina via Facebook Marketplace. However, her plans are thrown into disarray when she discovers the sale may not have been on the up and up. When Pepper Boden, the supposed rightful owner, enters the picture, Opal’s idyllic notions of farm life are squashed. Forced to coexist on the farm until the ownership can be sorted out, Opal and Pepper do nothing but chafe and irritate one another. Over time, however, the dynamic between the two shifts and an unexpected attraction develops. As this de facto relationship slowly blooms, readers quickly flip through the pages to find out if it will become a floral tribute or a whoops a daisy.
Eddings does a nice job developing Opal and Pepper. They are multifaceted characters with delightful personalities; readers easily form a connection to them. Their “grumpy/sunshine” dynamic is smile worthy, making this slow-burn romance an enchanting read. What’s more, the storytelling is filled to the brim with Eddings’ joyful, animated tone, making Late Bloomer the perfect vacation read.
Final remarks…
Eddings does a nice job with this heartfelt depiction of love and relationships. Told with raw, refreshing tenderness, Late Bloomer is both captivating and engaging. Readers will enjoy this happily-ever-after.
A word about the audiobook…
If you are one that prefers to listen to books, Ellie Gossage delivers a polished, emotive, and nuanced performance in Late Bloomer’s audiobook adaptation. Her narration style and range are quite distinctive; it provides her with the ability to give voice to Eddings’ multidimensional, layered characters. Her highly skilled, passionate narration is nothing short of immersive and captivating; she simply makes the storytelling come to life. It is easy to see why she is considered one of the top audiobook narrators in the industry; her performance in Late Bloomer is exemplary.
Mazey is a neurodiverse author, dentist, and (most importantly) stage mom to her cats, Yaya and Zadie. She can most often be found reading romance novels under her weighted blanket and asking her fiance to bring her snacks. She’s made it her personal mission in life to destigmatize mental health issues and write love stories for every brain. With roots in Cleveland and Philadelphia, she now calls North Carolina home. Follow these links to learn more about her:
Themes: discrimination, hiding in the closet, coming out, self-discovery, women loving women, standing up for one’s rights, friendship, relationships, family, loss, grief, love, parenting, getting pregnant, raising a family, divorce, children, school, teaching, school politics, school communities, the LGBTQIA+ community
The blurb…
Josie has felt invisible for most of her life—first as the only lesbian at her high school in the ’90s, then in a secret relationship with her closeted girlfriend, and now in a closet of her own as an English teacher at a suburban high school. Her silence is safe, stifling, and second-nature on most days and has taken a backseat to the monumental tasks of grieving her beloved father’s death and undergoing fertility treatments in her limited spare time.
…until a student comes out to her in a writing assignment, and she is thrust into a small-town spotlight. As the target of the student’s angry parents and a slew of anonymous threats, Josie must decide if it’s finally time to speak up for herself and risk her job, her family, and her ambivalence.
My thoughts…
Every now and then you come across a book that just knocks your socks off. Actually Invisible by Elisa Greb did that for me. The writing is crisp and clean, flowing neatly across the page. Greb uses imagery, symbolism and metaphor with a confidence that leaves appreciative readers slightly in awe. The narrative is compelling and impactful, containing a story structure that’s built upon solid ground. In addition to that, it’s eloquently threaded with a guiding theme that’s cohesive and purposeful. Each scene is plotted and planned with sure footed intent, engaging readers and drawing them in.
I imagine that this story wasn’t an easy one to write. There are time jumps and multiple sub-plots featuring several important players, yet Greb navigates the landscape with the grace of a polished writer. Using theme to strengthen the storytelling, she ties it together in a clear and understandable manner. It’s beautifully done, making the English teacher in me smile.
Final remarks…
When I finished Actually Invisible, I had to know more about Elisa Greb. I was amazed to learn that this is her debut novel. It’s impressive storytelling, and I’d encourage anyone that enjoys reading emotionally honest fiction to shove it into their TBR pile ASAP. Josie’s journey is heartfelt and convincing, scripted with a sincere passion that truly resonates. She is a genuine unsung hero trying to live an authentic life, committing herself fully to those she values most. This author has definitely pinged my radar, and I look forward to her next novel.
Elisa Greb has a B.A. in English Literature and a M.Ed. in Secondary English Education. She loves all things to do with words—reading, writing, poetry, grammar, linguistics, and more—and is a sucker for a good pun and a well-planned road trip. She lives in Pittsburgh with her wife and two sons. Click on the links below to learn more.
Themes : bisexuality, exes, theatre, Broadway, the movie industry, acting, writing, women loving women, falling in love, soul mates, friendships, romance roadblocks
Tropes : celebrity, long distance relationships, love vs career, age-gap, whirlwind romance
The blurb…
In the glittering world of Broadway, where dreams take center stage and the city that never sleeps pulses with life, Heather McCarthy, a dazzling Broadway actress at the zenith of her career, meets Grace Elliott, a celebrated romance novelist poised to see her latest masterpiece leap from the pages to the silver screen.
As the two women from different worlds collide, their connection is electric, their passion undeniable, and a love story unfolds. But fate, of course, has other plans. Heather and Grace confront a heartbreaking ultimatum when Grace’s movie adaptation demands Heather as its leading lady. The catch? The studio forbids any off-screen romance between the two.
With hearts torn asunder, their relationship takes an unexpected twist. Through late-night texts, phone calls, and voicemails, the flame of their connection refuses to be extinguished as they grapple with the tantalizing prospect of a love that could either defy all odds or shatter beneath the weight of industry expectations.
In the heart-stirring third act, Heather and Grace must confront the ghosts of their choices and decide if their love is worth the sacrifices demanded by fame and fortune. Will they rewrite the script of their lives, or will their careers that seemingly brought them together become the very thing that tears them apart?
My thoughts…
Erin Zak creates some of the best characters; readers easily connect with them. Such is the case with When Worlds Collide’s Heather and Grace. They possess a unique mix of qualities that make them admirable, yet relatable. They are complex women with vulnerabilities and strengths that resonate with readers, leaving quite an impression. Zak is somewhat of a master at this. She loves playing with real and raw vulnerabilities within her characters. She knows exactly how to balance the positive and negative energies within her leading ladies, and it elevates the storytelling. The result is a compelling narrative that readers care about.
This isn’t Zak’s first celebrity romance; she’s written a couple of others. Through them all, she’s shown that she knows how to give readers behind-the-scenes glimpses into a lifestyle that readers find captivating. She plays up the magic—glamorous women, designer clothing and fancy parties— while exploring the challenges of fame, public scrutiny and media attention. In regards to When Worlds Collide, she pursues the impact of Heather’s celebrity status as it concerns personal insecurities and issues. While the contrast between fame and normalcy is well played in this novel, it’s Heather and Grace’s romantic journey that truly hooks readers. The shared moments, the doubt and insecurity, the pressure from Hollywood execs—it’s intense and captivating.
While the love affair between Heather and Grace is a bit of whirlwind, Zak manages to keep it real by focusing on the trust, respect and commitment it takes to build a relationship. This registers with readers, making the storytelling more impactive and personal. What’s more, readers become emotionally invested in their journey; that’s largely due to the fact that she places them inside gorgeously scripted scenes. The nuance, tone and dialogue feel authentic and honest. She includes experiences that are not unique to celebrities; they are relatable to all. They are plausible challenges and opportunities, ones faced everyday by the ordinary individual. And while the celebrity romance does draw readers in, it’s the vulnerabilities exposed by life and the love gained by risk that keep the story most compelling.
Final remarks…
For the longest time The Road Home was my favorite Zak book. Then, she wrote Home for the Holidays and Heidi stole my heart. (No pressure, Erin, but could we see more of her someday?) Now, Zak has written this gem and I’m at a loss to say which book is my most favorite. It’s hard to choose. I think I love Zak’s writing because she understands her characters and that transfers to the page. Vulnerabilities are split wide open and readers cannot look away. They can only embrace it and love it.
Erin Zak has written over ten full-length, standalone novels. Her first book, Falling into Her, was a Goldie finalist for Best Debut Novel. Breaking Down Her Walls and Create a Life to Love were both Lammy finalists for Lesbian Romance.
Erin currently resides in Florida, away from the snow and cold, near the Gulf coast with her wife and their two dogs, Hanna and Eleanor. She actually hates the sweltering heat and can’t wait for the day when her wife okays a move to Colorado. When she’s not writing, she’s obsessively collecting Star Wars memorabilia, planning the next trip to Disney World, or whipping up something delicious to eat in the kitchen. She also produces a weekly podcast called The Weekly Wine Down with her best friends, Jackie D, Stacy, and Stacey.
If you’d like to know more about Erin, click on the following links:
Women Using Words 